Modeling; sports

[craig]

The "running" leg of a sports portfolio I am working on. Let me know your thoughts

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[mysteryscribe]

Just an opinion from someone who never shot one of these. I think on 2 I would have either cropped her higher or showed the full body. Seems a little clumsy to me but it's just my old man's opinion.

1. should be right on for what you want though.

 

[ShutteredEye]

Hmmm, how to say this delicately. The first thing I saw was....maybe something she wouldn't want people to see first off?

And I can only see the second shot I think.

 

[craig]

Thanks guys! I questioned the nipples and the crop in the second frame as well. I like the nipples, but we will see what she thinks. Maybe if I cropped above the waist?

 

[Alison]

I like the second shot. In the first it looks like the focus fall just short of her face, but maybe that's just my eyes? I love the lighting in her eyes on the second. Didn't notice the nipples in the second until Robert pointed them out, they don't bother me though.

 

[craig]

I had a huge white card bounce on a light stand. The sweet spot was only about four feet wide. I had her run past it to make it look more natural. The first shot is one of the (many) "approach" shots so it is slightly off. None the less this one says athlete running to me.