FreshFromTheGrave
TPF Noob!
- Joined
- May 31, 2013
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- London
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- www.stevenolver.com
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So I took a photo. Then ate one. They were quite tasty
It's been a crazy, stormy weekend in Cape Town: thunder, bucket loads of hail, pouring rain, gale force winds and so forth so there was no way in heck I was taking my new 'baby' outside. So this is all I have to show for the weekend
Quite noobish, be nice.

Mom made muffins by FreshFromTheGrave, on Flickr
So from my own perspective what I could have done is: give more space at the bottom of the frame to keep the focus somewhere closer to middle. I think focusing so low in the frame is a bit problematic but the 18-55 wouldn't have given enough blur if I'd focused on the middle row of muffins. The contrast is a bit too much but I'm ok with the red in this instance since it gives a sense of warmth and homeliness.
Anything else to add?
*All fixed now.

Mom made muffins by FreshFromTheGrave, on Flickr
So from my own perspective what I could have done is: give more space at the bottom of the frame to keep the focus somewhere closer to middle. I think focusing so low in the frame is a bit problematic but the 18-55 wouldn't have given enough blur if I'd focused on the middle row of muffins. The contrast is a bit too much but I'm ok with the red in this instance since it gives a sense of warmth and homeliness.
Anything else to add?
*All fixed now.
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