More CC Porfavor

[Rosy]

More pics of Pudge for critique.

I'm looking for expert eyes to see how my focus is and what i should different on the lighting (OCF at 45 degrees camera left, bounced off ceiling)

**For the second i know the little boy if off focus, was it due to not enought DOF??


facebook_757382871 by casualapproach, on Flickr




facebook_-1247078988 by casualapproach, on Flickr

 

[Bo4key]

In the second one, I would try to get some separation between the subjects and the background, it would give the shot some more dimension.

In both images, try finding a way to light the background to eliminate some of the harsh shadows your primary flash is creating.

 

[LuckySe7en]

looks like you need to soften the light some how, shadows don't look good. And the feet of boy #3 should have been tucked in or out of the picture.

 

[KmH]

And the way you soften up the light is to make it apparently larger by using a light modifier.

Light modifiers are umbrellas, brolly boxes, softboxes, etc.

Impact Digital Flash Umbrella Mount Kit

Photek 36" Softlighter, Diffusing Umbrella with Black Cover.

Westcott 50" Recessed Front Apollo JS #2348