I actually think this is really cool.
It reminds me of traditional Eastern landscapes, before Western influence. These paintings were not visually representational, but psychologically representational. They embedded their personal feelings and emotions into the image rather than depicting details and exact appearances. Perspective was flattened, and they used blank spaces on the paper--voids--which was called "the beauty of the blank." Motion was a common theme, as well.
I see your image doing something very similar, but not imitative. You tend to approach subjects in a non-representaional way, which is what makes your work unique and interesting. It is as much a discovery of the subject or object depicted as it is a discovery and insight into your own psychology. In a way, your images are very autobiographical.