Muskegon MI

CreAting iMagERy Art · Aug 22, 2010

Shots from a campground in Muskegon, MI that I thought had good composition. C&C is appreciated and really look forward to.

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DanFinePhotography · Aug 23, 2010

haha #5 is awesome. #1 might be a tad centered

Flems · Aug 28, 2010

Number 1 would be a little stronger if it wasn't so central; the rule of thirds would have helped more here. The horizon in #3 is also off a bit too. I like the colours/tone in #4, it definitely has a good mood effect.

Einstein · Aug 28, 2010

i agree with the posts above on #1

4 is my favorite, i like the soft colors and it has a moody feel to it

5 is also good, even thought the subject is centered the focus sharp and you make good use of DOF

CreAting iMagERy Art · Aug 28, 2010

Thanks for the feedback, Wish I could go back right now and re take the first one. I will take the advice and add it for next time. Number 4 was probably my favorite of all of them with the colors and mood. #5 was luck that he happen to be in that right spot with good lighting, but i like the composition of it. Thanks again for the comments and I will keep everything into consideration for future photos.