My 1st post on TPF :)

[equinoxe7]

Hello, My name is Luke. A Malaysian. I'm new to this forum *waves* Am an amateur in photography and had been taking pics for around a year or so. This is my 1st post here, a photoshoot that I did with my gf for my college assignment.

#1

#2

#3

#4

#5

#6

Equipment used(All equipment borrowed from a good friend of mine):
Nikon D80(Built in flash with commander mode on), Sigma 10-20mm, SB-600(as slave), Silver reflector.

Art Direction: Evon(my gf) and Me
Posing: Evon

Critique and comment pls? I'm still learning.

 

[Sideburns]

You did a really good job. The wind effect is awesome...especially on her dress.

4 and 6 are my favourite.

 

[kevinblahh]

very interesting shots

 

[Viperjet]

Very very neat.

I'm really impressed.

What kind of editing did you do to the shots?

 

[The Phototron]

Love the work you put into post-processing.

 

[.Serenity.]

great shots, your model looks so doll-ish, its really quite interesting!

 

[roentarre]

The mood is spetacular!!

 

[equinoxe7]

You did a really good job. The wind effect is awesome...especially on her dress.

4 and 6 are my favourite.

Thanks man

very interesting shots

thank you

Very very neat.

I'm really impressed.

What kind of editing did you do to the shots?

Thanks man

Er... I edited them in Lightroom, there's a preset named "Cold Tone". I just added it, then made two exposures. 1 for the background, 1 for the sky. I make sure that the model in the background layer is bright enough 1st. Then I combined both the layers in Photoshop. Then i used curves to darken the whole photo but leaving the model and the foreground bright enough that it wont look unnatural.

Love the work you put into post-processing.

Thank you

great shots, your model looks so doll-ish, its really quite interesting!

Haha, yea she does look so. thanks!

The mood is spetacular!!

thanks!

 

[Lyncca]

These are amazing! Your gf is beautiful and the background and cool feeling really work.

The only thing I see is that in #5 her arms look a bit weird. I found I was looking at them more than anything else in the picture.

I'm no pro at critiques, but that one just struck me as odd.

 

[Doug]

First off Welcome to the forum Luke. These are some great shots, I'm impressed.