My best to date (atleast I think so)

Discussion in 'People Photography' started by KBM1016, Feb 22, 2012.

  1. KBM1016

    KBM1016 TPF Noob!

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    I would really like to know what everyone thinks about these pictures technically. Please let me know if there is anything I can do to improve but I think I executed these two shots pretty well :thumbup:

    1. This appears pretty bright because when it prints, it prints darker. I promise I don't have blown out sections of her face in the final print
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    _MG_0085 by Autumnlightsphotos, on Flickr

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    _MG_0088 by Autumnlightsphotos, on Flickr


     
  2. DiskoJoe

    DiskoJoe Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    Not too bad. Just some small things.

    1 - A bit too high key for her skin tone. She is a bit washed out but this could be easily fixed. Would have been good to zoom out just a bit more. This photo framed might be a bit tight on the right side where her ear is close to the edge.

    2- White balance seems off a bit. Kind of a blue under tone happening and a little too pink. Both easy fixes. Now the picture might have been more visually appealing if you had been able to get the girl to mirror the pose of the girl on the left with her legs sticking out.
     
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    Bad color cast
     

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