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My brother and his girlfriend

ozzono

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My brother: David
My sister-in-law: Olga

I hope that you like.

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I don't really like what (i assume) you've done to this. i like the composition but the post procesing leaves alot to be desired. I think his eyes looks very unrealistic. Look like they've been dodged excessively and blurred maybe. They look disjointed from his face. I also don't like the way that their faces are lit up like they have lights beneath their skin. The light doesn';t look very realistic and i suspect its been done on photoshop.
 
I think it looks good, the composition is donw well i think and i dont have a problem with the photoshoping thats been done, except maybe for the dark blur around the edges. I think it would look a lot better without it or reduced a bit
 
i think the photo is great. the post-proccessing is interesting.
wonder what effect was added.
 
I like it very much as well, and I actually quite like the photoshopping done. The only thing I would change is to not her shirt selectively coloured. (Or whatever that might be in the lower right corner)
 
I like this quite a bit. I like the way their expressions are so 'real', not posed. However, I think its a bit of a shame that the girl's face is a bit blurred. Becuase her face already appears a little smaller that the guys face, it kind of pushes her to the background of the photo. But its a beautifull photo none the less! very good.
 
I really like it... I like how the girl is pushed to the background & the focus is the guy. The editing on his eyes/face do make it look edited, but in a way that makes his eyes piercing...

Perhaps I like it because I work for an optical company & it reminds me of one of our ads for contacts ;)
 
I like the photo. I think it really draws into his eyes as the main focal point and leaves your sister-in-law as background. Unless you wanted the photo to be mostly about your brother rather than the two of them.

Hope that made sense.... lovely shot otherwise.

Pamela
 
the only thing that bothers me here are his eyes, they look a bit artificial. everything else is great :)
 
"WOAH!" That was my first reaction... and I like that! It's been a while since a portrait made react like that.

This is certainly a bold departure. And... this is a case where the maker remembered to be different but didn't forget to be good. I have to say this is one of the strongest images I've seen in the forum in any of the galleries.

-Pete
 
Thank you very much to all by the commentaries and the advice. Greetings from Spain.

Muchas gracias a todos por los comentarios y por los consejos. Saludos desde España.
 
Different, but I do find the image very interesting and it caught my attention for a long time which it good. Well done.

Eric
 

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