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They have a skate inspired alternative lifestylish feel to them. i skate so obviously that first one is sick.
 
Welcome to the forum. You will definitely get some feedback here - you may not like it, but at least it will be very honest. My first comment is that you should number your images as this makes it a lot easier for a reviewer to refer to any specific on by number. My second comment is that these are nice snapshots and if you like them, then that is what counts, but I think you will want to read up on some of the basic rules of composition, particularly if you want to be able to shoot for a magazine some day.

I would encourage you to surf the web, but you could start with - Advanced Composition -- Part I - there are two following web sites with the links at the end of the site. As well, have a look at this one - Photography Composition Articles Library as there are a number of links to sites on composition. There are a number of books that have been written on composition - you might want to look at one by Bryan Peterson called Learning to See Creatively - Amazon.com: Learning to See Creatively: Design, Color & Composition in Photography (Updated Edition) (9780817441814): Bryan Peterson: Books. There are lots of others. Hope this helps.

WesternGuy
 
Thanks Hare0103. Thats really cool that you skate too! And thanks WesternGuy. I'll look into those.
 
^^ What does "Oh" mean? Idk just looking for some feedback. Anything I can do to improve my photos? I honestly just have like a type of shooting I like to do. I don't want it to look super clean and stuff. I like experimenting with filters and making them look a bit gritty.
 
I really like the one of the girl on the dryer. It has a retro feel to it that is also very contemporary ... hard to explain.
 
I really like the one of the girl on the dryer. It has a retro feel to it that is also very contemporary ... hard to explain.

thanks. that means a lot!
 
bump. (sorry)
 
I don't think it is a crime to bump your own thread, but if you are somewhat disappointed in the replies, then perhaps the shots just don't elicit a reaction.

Try again with different shots.

Fewer shots.

One shot.

Then ask questions about it.
 

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