My first HDR for C&C please

[giulio1993]

Here's my first HDR... sorry for the watermark




thanks

 

[D-B-J]

It looks a little over cooked, which is often the problem with a beginner using HDR. Try moving your sliders and figuring out how to make it look a little more realistic.

Regards,
Jake

 

[SlickSalmon]

Looks like you've got motion blur in the clouds...typical problem of HDR and things that move.

 

[giulio1993]

Looks like you've got motion blur in the clouds...typical problem of HDR and things that move.

yes.. that's the biggest problem of my dslr: it doesn't have any AEB.

What about sharpness? Should I have used a smaller aperture?

and what about the subject?

 

[heyjoe]

Looks like you've got motion blur in the clouds...typical problem of HDR and things that move.

yes.. that's the biggest problem of my dslr: it doesn't have any AEB.

What about sharpness? Should I have used a smaller aperture?

and what about the subject?

The sign in the middle of the mountain kills it for me. And I would crop the bottom left road/sign. Make it look more like a nature/natural shot.

 

[giulio1993]

here's my second attempt



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