my first time to take a portrait

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next time focus more on focusing than really over-the-top post processing...
 

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Have to agree ^^. Missed focus, cropped hands, awkward angle... I think with a more conservative processing this would be a nice casual portrait.
 

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It's not that I don't like the processing that was done, I think it looks really cool. But to me it takes something away from the image itself and actually draws my eye away from the person. I find myself spending more time looking at the edges of his shirt than at the shirt itself or the face. Work on the refinement of the processing a bit and nail down the focus and they will get much better.
 
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my hand was shaking i was taking my breathe too hard soccer Dude D
 

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