I'm not a privileged little college kid. I don't believe I'm a particularly arrogant artistic type. And I don't think I'm better than you or anyone else. I'm a 62 year-old man who has been shooting photographs and making an effort to improve as a photographer for well over 40 years. Your photos are ok. Just fine for the family album or facebook. They are well exposed for the most part and in focus. Let's be honest here... with today's cameras just about anyone can take a "good" picture. Also, there's not a person here on the forum who doesn't think there son, daughter, grandson, granddaughter is the cutest most photogenic human ever pose for the camera.
So, when you start out by stating that your kids are superphotogenic; especially your daughter whom you've never taken a bad picture of.. you better be able to deliver the goods.
I'm sure that your friends and family have told you that you are a fantastic photographer and your kids are sooooo cute. You won't get that here. If you want advice on how to improve a photo, or if you need technical advice and constructive criticism there are plenty of knowledgeable people here who would be happy to help you out.
The first photo I posted here when I joined was one I was very proud of. It didn't take very long for me to realize that, in the eyes of others on the forum, it could be improved upon. Ok. I've learned that this is a good place to get advice and to learn how to improve; it's not a good place to post pictures and sit back an wait for the pats on the back.
Praise for photos here is rare and hard-earned and certainly not based on whether you can pull off a good snapshot of a cute kid.