My latest effort...

[BuS_RiDeR]

Setup:

2 400ws mono-lights
Canon 50D w/EFs 17-85mm lens
plain white wall as background

Thank you for looking!

 

[ceeboy14]

What she is in the process of doing is as important as the expression on her face...she's looking down and there are parts of other stuff in the background, and...I'm not sure what I'm supposed to comment about????

 

[BuS_RiDeR]

What she is in the process of doing is as important as the expression on her face...she's looking down and there are parts of other stuff in the background, and...I'm not sure what I'm supposed to comment about????

Point taken... She is playing a guitar. I see now it may have been better to include the guitar in the pic.

Thanks for the input.

 

[Scuba]

The light on the right needs to be turned down her face is blown on that side...plus what was said above.

 

[BuS_RiDeR]

The light on the right needs to be turned down her face is blown on that side...plus what was said above.

Thanks for your input.

 

[raaskohx10]

Light falling on the white wall above her head is harsh. Some adjustment in light, removal of unwanted things from the background, and lowering the camera to capture more of guitar would certainly create a story out of the shot.

 

[BuS_RiDeR]

Light falling on the white wall above her head is harsh. Some adjustment in light, removal of unwanted things from the background, and lowering the camera to capture more of guitar would certainly create a story out of the shot.

Gloss white paint on the walls... I should have noticed that before... Good point.