My new website

[rocksteady]

Please take a look and let me know what you think!

www.kurtisslloyd.com

 

[tirediron]

I'm not a fan of the "entry page" It adds one more, and IMO, unnecessary stop to getting into the 'site. I'm confused however; what is the purpose of the 'site? I don't know where you are located; London is a LARGE city. There's no telephone # and your e-mail isn't immediately obvious either. I would suggest re-working your bio page sort out the problem with the picture which appears underneath the text, and include a photo of yourself and more clear contact information.

With respect to the photographs, you have some good subject matter, but there are many images with technical issues, or minor flaws which could easily be resolved with some further work in post.

You're off to a good start here, but I think it needs further work. I would also revisit your choice of fonts/size. I find this very hard to read.

 

[PhotoWrangler]

Simple. Clean. Easy. I like it.

If you were going for a website that solicits business, see ^his comment about location, contact information etc.

If you were simply going for a site to exhibit your work, you've gone a good job in my opinion.

 

[CCericola]

All the type was rendered incorrectly making it blurry and hard to read.

 

[dakkon76]

Christina beat me to it - this is the first thing I noticed... aside from the irritating "enter" page that nobody really needs to do anymore. Someone came up with that back in the day when bandwidth was an issue and sites loaded slowly. It was a way to tell your users "Don't worry, you made it to my page... click here and be prepared to wait for all of my stuff to load" ... anymore, it's just an annoyance.

 

[PhotoWrangler]

it's just an annoyance.

That is quite a subjective aspect of a website, much like music. An annoyance for you might be something someone else prefers.

 

[SabrinaO]

Christina beat me to it - this is the first thing I noticed... aside from the irritating "enter" page that nobody really needs to do anymore. Someone came up with that back in the day when bandwidth was an issue and sites loaded slowly. It was a way to tell your users "Don't worry, you made it to my page... click here and be prepared to wait for all of my stuff to load" ... anymore, it's just an annoyance.

Actually flash sites need the splash page so the website can be found on search engines.

 

[Sw1tchFX]

alot of your images are low key, i'd change the site from white, to a dark gray or black, make them easier to see. Also, and this is matter of opinion: About's in the 3rd person are annoying as hell and come off as pretentious. Otherwise, I think it's just fine.