My portraits.

[mocca]

Hello everyone!
Something from me, to welcome:

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[WhiskeyTango]

These definitely aren't to my taste. The desaturation and green caste in the 1st one, coupled with the blur, make the image almost disturbing. Might be what your were going for... The 2nd is similar. Image 3 had potential, but I want to see her looking at the camera, otherwise I want to know what she's looking at. Focus, color, and light are all better in that shot, if perhaps still a touch green.

 

[Hobbytog]

No.2 for me. Unconventional relaxed pose that works with the subject. Love the conversion.

 

[jowensphoto]

I think you have a very unique style. Some people will love it, some won't. Such is the life of an artist.

Agree with WT re: color cast; you may want to check your calibration if the green cast wasn't intenational.

 

[mocca]

@WhiskeyTango,
Thank you for your feedback. I always try in my portraits to show more than just a beautiful model. I like when they express: anxiety, joy, a question. Photo should stop you, have something to tell. That is what I am trying and looking for. Treatment or finish is a question of taste, but I acknowledge that you did not like it. Thank you

@Hobbytog,Jowensphoto- thank you

 

[kundalini]

Beautiful ladies and captured well. I find your style to be interesting and certainly worth looking at more than once.

The only one that has a bit of bother for me is #3. I find the far eyelashes and brow slightly distracting. I wish she had turned her head a little more to her right to have a complete profile of the mask.

Thanks for sharing.

 

[jowensphoto]

I do love number two... had to come back for another look. Strongest of the bunch, I'd say.

 

[rokvi]

Don't know why, but I like #4.

 

[fjrabon]

I liked 3 the best, though I would have liked to have a little more depth to her skin tone. Good work on all of them though.

 

[Trever1t]

I find them original and interesting. I don't personally like #1 but I do appreciate your style and intent. The others I find stimulating.

 

[gopal]

First look a little artificial...yes there is green cast....rest are nice ones....last is from CEASER'S FORT? wow.

 

[FireDiva]

I like #4....she looks exotic....daring the viewer to approach if they dare!

 

[mocca]

Thank you all for your opinions They are really important for me.

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[Jaemie]

I like their moody, surreal quality, and the confidence and independent charm of the models.

 

[mocca]

Jaemie , thank you