Natural beauty and light

Samerr9 · Sep 7, 2013

Hi all..

Some of yesterday's photo session.. Any c&c is much appreciated..

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Rebekah5280 · Sep 7, 2013

Love the lighting. Nice and soft. Pretty.

pisto1981 · Sep 7, 2013

These are all very good imo

Samerr9 · Sep 7, 2013

Rebekah5280 said:
Love the lighting. Nice and soft. Pretty.

pisto1981 said:
These are all very good imo

Thank you guys..

tirediron · Sep 7, 2013

Nicely done!

DanOstergren · Sep 7, 2013

Either her makeup was really caked on, or her face was smoothed over too much in editing and perhaps too much highlight was added to her face in editing. Either way, the detail, color and light on her face don't match the rest of her skin. If you did add highlights in post, I would recommend going back to contour her cheek bones and tone down the facial highlights just a little bit.

Ilovemycam · Sep 7, 2013

Nice, send in more. Beautiful!

Trever1t · Sep 7, 2013

I'd like to get my ____ err lens focused on her, wow!

Derrel · Sep 7, 2013

I think these are all awkward framings or just odd crops. In the first two, her head is right at the top of the frame, and the fingers clear at the very bottom of the frame, and some fingers cropped off in the second shot. In the second two shots, we see very odd amputation right at the elbow AND a head chop. This is odd framing to say the least. That's my C&C.

mmaria · Sep 9, 2013

DanOstergren said:
Either her makeup was really caked on, or her face was smoothed over too much in editing and perhaps too much highlight was added to her face in editing. Either way, the detail, color and light on her face don't match the rest of her skin. If you did add highlights in post, I would recommend going back to contour her cheek bones and tone down the facial highlights just a little bit.

Derrel said:
I think these are all awkward framings or just odd crops. In the first two, her head is right at the top of the frame, and the fingers clear at the very bottom of the frame, and some fingers cropped off in the second shot. In the second two shots, we see very odd amputation right at the elbow AND a head chop. This is odd framing to say the least. That's my C&C.

The first thing that comes trough my mind was explained by DanOstergren, the second was explaind by Derrel