Need c/c

[Muct]

With this:

I like it myself, but I get the feeling that somethings missing on it.. I dunno..
edits etc are welcome.
OH and these, do these this look good do you think?

had to whiten out rude word.

 

[invisible]

The first two are uninteresting to me. The third one, however, held my attention a bit – the word with whiteout in particular. It looks, however, like the whiteout was applied in post and it doesn't really look real. As is, it's so bright that it makes the eye travel there instead of going to the otherwise brightest area of the image, which would be the far right. If this was mine, I'd try to darken the right hand side and then "reapply" the whiteout in a way that doesn't look so fake.

 

[889Media]

If this was mine, I'd try to darken the right hand side and then "reapply" the whiteout in a way that doesn't look so fake.

I do not think the whiteout is a part of the image, rather than something that was put on there before posting the image not to include a dirty word or something. So guess the poster did not bother to use to much time on that part... if not...it just sucks!

 

[Muct]

The white part isn't a part of the image, just didn't want rude words up here x)

 

[helloimruth]

the first two were not very interesting, especially the first one, it lacked a focus/topic.
i like the third one, but personally i think it would be a lot better if you just leave the "bad word" there, instead of whiteing it out.