Need help

[Omarphoto6911]

hey everyone I'm new to this forum I just need some critiquing of my work I like to get some struct of criticism

 

[chuasam]

Generally really strong photos and I am very picky. What are the images for?if these are actor headshots, try not to get the hands covering half the mouth. Image 3 could be improved by having subject farther from the wall. Image 4 - eye contact is important in headshots. Can't stop looking at image 1. Image 3 - what is the purpose of the image? She has this look of apprehension.

As I said, overall good work. A longer faster lens might help a bit but this is good work.

 

[Omarphoto6911]

Generally really strong photos and I am very picky. What are the images for?if these are actor headshots, try not to get the hands covering half the mouth. Image 3 could be improved by having subject farther from the wall. Image 4 - eye contact is important in headshots. Can't stop looking at image 1. Image 3 - what is the purpose of the image? She has this look of apprehension.

As I said, overall good work. A longer faster lens might help a bit but this is good work.

Thanks all I really value your words these are all test shoots not really any purpose I just brought the sigma 85mm art and needed to test it


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[The_Traveler]

Very nice shots although they seem a bit dark to me.

 

[Omarphoto6911]

Very nice shots although they seem a bit dark to me.

I kinda like my photos a little darker but I do get carried away at times


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[Granddad]

#1 takes the prize for me although I'll agree that they're all good work. Good use of lighting.
Welcome to the forum. I look forward to seeing more of your work.