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Eclivic

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Ok so I shot this today and I love the Picture. But I need to stand the Hornets out some. The trouble is they are a very small type of Hornet so If I crop it I don't want to make them seem like the bigger brothers.

Any Suggestions.
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i dont understand why cant you crop it or shoot it closer?
 
I can crop it, but don't want to loose the size of the leaf to show how small these little guys are. Mainly the upper right Leaf.
 
the hornet (from what i can tell) is really dark, and doesnt stand out well. you could try to lighten it up in photoshop, but it seems to me that it's going to be hard to bring it out. then again i'm noobly

just my two cents
 
I can crop it, but don't want to loose the size of the leaf to show how small these little guys are. Mainly the upper right Leaf.

But the upper right leaf is nowhere near the subject. The subject is the hornets, right? Therefore, they are all that matters.

Cropping in so that they fill more of the frame won't confuse people into thinking they are a bigger species of hornet. There are two types of people in the world; people who know their hornets and people who don't. The ones who do will appreciate a nice crop to show the detail of this species, the people who don't will just say "Oooh, a fly!".

Think about what your subject is. Is it the hornets, or the leaf? They are too far apart in the frame to be both and the composition doesn't compliment both.

Also, as the person above me said, the hornets are pretty dark - you'd be doing well if you get much more detail out of them. Try again but this time think about how you can make the insect the main subject in the frame while at the same time showing its size, if that's what you want to show.

To show size you could look for insects around rose thorns (but crop in tight), other bigger or smaller insects, close right in to the insect so you can also see the veins of the leaf, that kind of stuff. You can't get much of a feeling of size if your comparison is with another item several inches away.
 
Sorry but it just doesnt do it for me, I take it you are trying to show off the hornet but I can ony see the bush/pot plant......................you need to make the subject matter the main subject in the photo
 
Ok I did Minor crop with highlights on hornets

Sorry about the Double Picture. The way i sync my pics with my site will delete the originals
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To be honest with you, I didn't notice the Hornet at first. It was kinda lost in all the green. Can you do a super tight crop?
 
Beyond the Basics is not a C&C forum section.

If that is a hornet, and it is the intended primary subject in the image, it is way to small in the image frame to have sufficient visual weight.
 
You need to tell the hornet to move to the lit side of the leaf. Part of photography is controlling/directing your models. :lol:
 
If you are trying to do a macro, I think it is not there yet. Try another angle. If this is a first try, good and practise more.
 

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