Need some realy helpfull Critique, first steps

[nmts]

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[Designer]

As photographs go, they are not very well done.

As an artistic statement, I don't get it.

 

[goodguy]

As photographs go, they are not very well done.

As an artistic statement, I don't get it.

What the man said sorry

You cant just cut off the face, if you want to keep the girl face hidden find an angle where you cant see the detail of her face, play with shade to give the picture depth

 

[Light Guru]

Just because you don't like what others say does not mean you should defeat your post.