Never Posted for Critique Before...

[gnorknik]

Here are a few random shots from my portfolio. I wanted some honest feedback/criticism from people who don't know me.

Disclaimer on #4- I'm not sure why, but this particular photo shows up grainy when viewed on certain websites and file viewers, but not others. It prints fine. Disregard the grain (if any).

Thank you!

 

[deeky]

By no mean an expert, but they grabbed my attention, so I'll throw in the little I have.

#1 - Pregnant bride - always an interesting subject. I would have moved the frame a little to the left.
#2 - Nice boob shot - at this angle, that's all I'm seeing.
#3 - Strongest of the three - just drawn a little too much to the hotspot on her right elbow.
#4 - Too close, too hot - The baby knows it, has that 'deer in the headlight's look, cute as it may be.

 

[gnorknik]

1- Yeah. I noticed that in post. I was still getting used to my full-frame camera, and cut off the left side.
2- Hehe. I have versions with her looking up at the camera, too. This one was the bride's favorite.
3- Good point. I can fix that.
4- Believe it or not, that's her expression whenever you take photos of her. I see what you mean, though. I'm still working on photo set-up for the 3 month stage. They're not calm and sleepy like newborns, so they don't lie still for long. But they obviously can't sit up on their own yet. This was an attempt at a glamour-type shot.

Thank you for the feedback! It's so hard to get people I know to be honest with me about my photos.