ucddyan
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Hello Everyone, this is my second or so post of photos, I've been doing a lot of reading up and trying to work on some things. Recently my company had a volleyball game and I brought the camera. I was trying to work on composition for the day. All photos were taken with Nikon D200, 18-200mm DX/VR, 1/125, auto aperture (don't have full exif data right now), auto focus. I was wondering if you could let me know if I'm getting better and what else I can do to improve here.
#1 My favorite shot of the day, but I think it feels a little strange with her oof in the front (feels like it would make more sense if she was oof in the back)?
#2 Trying to get an action shot, I think it looks okay, might have been better if the ball were more blurred (better feeling of motion). I know his hands look awkward. Should I have tried to get more of the background in (even though it was umbrellas and cars)?
#3 Trying to get people with happy, smiling faces. Trying not to center subjects. Perhaps there's too much space over her head? Should I have zoomed in more to fill more of the frame with her (it wasn't possible at the time, but just in general)?
#4 I like this one but... i don't know, her elbow is cut off and there's a bit of space above her head. Should I have framed it more so that there's dead space to the left where she's looking? Should i have maybe pulled out a bit instead of trying to fill the frame for this shot?
There's a couple of others but I'll leave it at this for now. Thanks for any help or comments, don't be afraid to be harsh, i don't get out a lot to shoot and I consider all comments seriously. Thanks!!!
#1 My favorite shot of the day, but I think it feels a little strange with her oof in the front (feels like it would make more sense if she was oof in the back)?
#2 Trying to get an action shot, I think it looks okay, might have been better if the ball were more blurred (better feeling of motion). I know his hands look awkward. Should I have tried to get more of the background in (even though it was umbrellas and cars)?
#3 Trying to get people with happy, smiling faces. Trying not to center subjects. Perhaps there's too much space over her head? Should I have zoomed in more to fill more of the frame with her (it wasn't possible at the time, but just in general)?
#4 I like this one but... i don't know, her elbow is cut off and there's a bit of space above her head. Should I have framed it more so that there's dead space to the left where she's looking? Should i have maybe pulled out a bit instead of trying to fill the frame for this shot?
There's a couple of others but I'll leave it at this for now. Thanks for any help or comments, don't be afraid to be harsh, i don't get out a lot to shoot and I consider all comments seriously. Thanks!!!
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