I think it's a very good image: tack sharp, love your DOF, and your lighting is nice and even.
What's he saying...? hmmm, no clue. He is apparently wearing some kind of work vest; is he instructing someone to keep away from the unseemly-looking background debris?
It's either "now Go out there and give it one hundred and Ten percent" or it's "No Jeremy, ask them if they want a carwash today! You gotta upsell! It's worth 25% of your secret shopper evalulations! Okay let's try this again.. 'we have a special on windshield washer fluid today'"