New one of the wife...

[castrol]

I wanted to try the umbrellas and strobes out this weekend but we sorta ran
out of time. Another little spur of the moment shoot turned out this shot of
which I am pleased.

 

[castrol]

The picture working?

 

[Ockie]

It works yes,
pretty good picture

 

[Eric Piercey]

Nice photo, great color, great crop, sharp... but it comes off a little too contrived. I hope you took the opportunity to snap many more in less forced poses. It looks like an awesome setting.

Other ideas.. hair down, hanging over her face... laughter.. some not looking at the camera shots, some B&W for the contrast.. I know she's not a model -she's your wife which therefore makes her 9000x ..no 900,000x harder to get to do anything, including relax. (at least w my wife)

 

[JimmyJaceyMom]

Wellm this photo is amazing but her feet kept distracting me... too bright and they take away from her pretty face I think to me.

 

[castrol]

Wellm this photo is amazing but her feet kept distracting me... too bright and they take away from her pretty face I think to me.

Thanks to everyone who commented. I apppreciate the comments greatly.
Maybe I can figure out how to burn so I can tone the feet down a bit.

 

[JimmyJaceyMom]

I don't have a burn tool with my editing program . I have to get one of those. But I just take the item I want to work on out and fix it and then put it back in. I do LOVE this photo though - it's great!