New Photos - Lookin for some crit - Beautiful Rockstars!

DeepSpring

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It's been a few years since I've been on here but I'd love to hear what ya'll think of a few recent shoots I did. Thank you!

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That's what I was going for. I tried it once a while ago and it didn't work out the way I had hoped. I was happy with these tho
 
#1 Your crop decision tends to make her arm abnormally long. Other than that it is a quality image
#2 The model's head position leads your eyes right up her nose and is not very flattering. The blown out highlights don't bother me because it is apparent that it is deliberate.
#3 I would like to see definition in her legs. Or if the loss of her legs is deliberate to the image I want to see a more dramatic skin tone in the legs.
#4 More up the nostrils. Head position is unflattering.
#5 Blown out highlights do more harm than good.

Overall: Good shots that only have to be tweeked a bit.
 
I really like this set, nice work. I would be curious to see #2 without the left side being as blown out. Even as is, very nice job.
 

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