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[lee3]

Please c&c first pics with first dslr

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[SpeedTrap]

So that would be a new pic of old computers.........
the first thing I would suggest is correcting the white balance.

 

[lee3]

So that would be a new pic of old computers.........
the first thing I would suggest is correcting the white balance.

yes it was old computers in storage in a fairly dark room

 

[Boutte]

I like 2 and three. They all show a good eye for composition.

 

[VortexOne]

I really like 5. The emergency light reflecting off the side makes the whole picture. Without that, the picture wouldn't have the saw "Wow" effect.

 

[Reyna]

1. I'm not real sure? It kinda just seems like you were looking for something to take a picture of here. Kinda boring and your white balance is off.
2. I would have backed up a little bit, or maybe it's your crop, but it looks tight. I also see a glare on the hat.
3. Again, I'm not real sure of what I am even CCing....
4. Your white balance looks way off to me. Also, I don't like how you cropped the hat off.
5. Your best shot to me, but could look a lot sharper. Looks like there was smoke in the air or something....