New to Photography, First attempt.

[Van16]

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[Ryan L]

Too many to get any real feedback, sorry but I have things I could actually get done in the 45 minutes it would take to critique them.

 

[Van16]

Too many to get any real feedback, sorry but I have things I could actually get done in the 45 minutes it would take to critique them.

I am sorry to inconvenience you. But thanks for coming down off of your high horse to reply.

 

[Ryan L]

Not a problem, I devoured a Klondike Bar after typing this. It was very productive and satisfying.

Seriously though if you want C&C post 3-5 at most, some people only like to see 1. You probably wont get much out of it. I will say this I like #2 because the exposure is right for her skin. The L shape btw the water and wall is appealing to the eyes. I dont like the crooked horizon.I dont care for the crop, I would have shot a little lower, or higher to avoid slicing half way throgh her breast. There is a hot spot on her nose, and that white brick is drawing my eye away from the subject. I would also clone out the yellow flag behind her head. Now that I typed all this, I decided I dont like #2 anymore, I am going with #1, her face is a little underexposed, but the sky is blown out. Should have used fill flash to light the subject and a smaller aperture to get some details in the sky.