new to phoyography tell me how it looks?

Discussion in 'Nature & Wildlife' started by sam7771, Mar 6, 2012.

  1. sam7771

    sam7771 TPF Noob!

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    Yea just started photography and took this just some touch up editing


     

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    o hey tyler Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    Well, generally you'd want to have the horizon straight. The water clearly isn't running downhill, so it's very obvious that the horizon is not level. The Deer also seem to be a touch underexposed. There are also some red branches coming into the lower right hand side of the frame which harms the composition by being a visually distracting element.

    It's nice that you got to capture some deer, there's a little bit that you could do to make this photo pop. Level the horizon for starters.
     
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    sam7771 TPF Noob!

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    Thanks!
     
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    I would also push up the saturation on the colors and work on nailing your focus. Was this shot straight to JPEG or are you shooting in RAW?
     
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    480sparky Chief Free Electron Relocator Supporting Member

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    Crop out the highway & signs in the background. They distract from the subjects.
     
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    Here's a fast edit & crop.

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    Thanks and now i see what you mean what editing software is that and it was strate to jpg
     

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