New with photography... Heres some of my work...

[adams_derek]

Sorry for the flood of images, all these have been adjusted to like 70kb format so easy downloads...

Photos go in order from oldest to newest batch

Most Recent shots @ PA Grand Canyon

 

[adams_derek]

Was the guy who panted the lines on this road drunk?

Welcome to the forum :sillysmi:

Haha, No kidding. Thanks. You don't live too far from me.

 

[adams_derek]

Very close to Ephrata, I live more in the wooded area though.

 

[LightSpeed]

Haha, No kidding. Thanks. You don't live too far from me.

Oh shoot! You're from LANCASTER?! YAY!!!!!!!!!!!! That's where I'm originally from!! I want to move back! It's much better than THIS sh*thole.

Life is a sh*thole , unless you have money. Like me! I love life wherever I am.

 

[adams_derek]

any suggestions or help anyone can give me

 

[12sndsgood]

any suggestions or help anyone can give me

bigger intercooler. lol just messin with ya, dont get to see to many boosted grand ams really.

 

[adams_derek]

Thanks!

 

[dumpweed]

Try posting less pictures at one time, too many to critique. I like the one with the rock. halfway down. And the first one try and straighten the horizon and cut a little bit of the water out at the bottom. And the focus seems to be on the rock, the rest seems out of focus

I tried tinkering a bit with it

 

[adams_derek]

Try posting less pictures at one time, too many to critique. I like the one with the rock. halfway down. And the first one try and straighten the horizon and cut a little bit of the water out at the bottom. And the focus seems to be on the rock, the rest seems out of focus

I tried tinkering a bit with it

Yeah for some reason I was playing around with the settings and had the focus more on the right idk how but it did... i really should start reading up on my xsi

 

[Blake.Oney]

The focus isn't to the right. That rock on the right is the closest thing to you and you had the focus on it. If there would have been anything else that close to you it would have been in focus to an extent depending on where you had your focus point. Some pretty decent shots in there for beginner. Definitely read your camera manual.

 

[phiya]

Since you're asking for help.

Be careful not to cut off portions of your subject, like the reflection of the rock in the photo of, well of the rock and it's reflection.

Also, you have a tendency to center your main subject in the shot... this is OKAY sometimes, read up on the rule of thirds to create some more interesting compositions.

 

[Corvphotography]

Was the guy who panted the lines on this road drunk?

Welcome to the forum :sillysmi:

i love the pic

:thumbup:

 

[fokker]

Some good shots in there, but there's a few too many pictures to give individual critiques. Also it's helpful to number the pictures for easy reference (ie it's easier to say "I like #7, #12 and #13" instead of "I like the one with the squiggly line road, the half a car and lake background, and the rock in the middle of the lake ones". Also, it's nice to leave a blank space line or two between the photos so you can actually see where one photo ends and another begins.

 

[adams_derek]

Got a new lense, really isnt as crisp, Mother took pics. Let me gather them I'm about to share them.

 

[adams_derek]

70-220mm - Also how can I change the shutter speed or whatever so there isn't the blur?

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