amolitor
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- Joined
- May 18, 2012
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- Can others edit my Photos
- Photos OK to edit
Lew, your "meatier" work is:
- more technically "correct" which on TPF means "less to criticize"
- contains fewer directly expressible ideas, which can be talked about
Without the title, this one might be nothing. WITH it, it becomes a pretty strong effort at a metaphorical work expressing something about something.
Most of your work is exquisitely well made, frequently very beautiful, but what it actually says is harder to get your arms around. It's not that it's better or worse, it's simply that there seems to be less to talk about with it. On good days, there is rather more to feel.
- more technically "correct" which on TPF means "less to criticize"
- contains fewer directly expressible ideas, which can be talked about
Without the title, this one might be nothing. WITH it, it becomes a pretty strong effort at a metaphorical work expressing something about something.
Most of your work is exquisitely well made, frequently very beautiful, but what it actually says is harder to get your arms around. It's not that it's better or worse, it's simply that there seems to be less to talk about with it. On good days, there is rather more to feel.