Not bad. The watermark is a bit distracting and I would like to see a little more of the baby in focus and maybe a reflector for fill on the face. I'm on my phone so it's a little hard to tell but I still think the portrait is nice overall.
Personally, I really like it as is. I think the shadows on the babies face makes it seem natural, almost as if it has turned from the light to sleep. Watermark is distracting.