Welcome. Okay, I think the first thing you need to do is explain what you're trying to do and what end result you want to see. There is no 'right' or 'wrong' in photography as long as you, the photographer are happy, that's what counts. That aside, some observations on the technical aspects:
1. Not really sure what is intended as the main subject. I find my eye getting confused between the dark space under the pier and the bright around it. As well, the colours appear to me somewhat over-saturated.
2. Wow, they've really done some changes here since the last time I visited. Once again, I'm not really seeing a distinct subject. The image is EXTREMELY busy, and there's just way too much to look at here.
3. An improvement; less busy but somewhat under-exposed and you seem to have missed the focus. The timbers in the right foreground are sharp, but the rest of the image is quite soft.
Just my $00.02 worth - your mileage may vary.
~John
