newbie first photos here.

[thiha]

Comments are warmly welcome.

 

[pic]

I think the one on the bridge is absolutley brilliant, I am a newbie to and enjoy taking pic's of my daughter - she is English/Laos - not really had time to post pics yet, but will.

 

[thiha]

I think the one on the bridge is absolutley brilliant, I am a newbie to and enjoy taking pic's of my daughter - she is English/Laos - not really had time to post pics yet, but will.

thanks alot for your comment.i really appreciate.i think my photos need something but i don't know which is needed.

 

[thiha]

 

[Jace]

From your first set, the first is good, though she's a bit underexposed I think. My favorite is the last shot, while number 3... not sure what you were going for, but it just doesn't work for me at all. Her skin looks way odd.


On the third one from your second set, I like it, but it probably would have been improved if you were a tab bit to your right when you took the photo, and your horizon is off, unless you were going for that look.

 

[Cpi2011]

Beatiful set of photographs looking so many amazing photos collection.

 

[thiha]

Thanks alot for all comments.
but l'm just beginner and models.are friend of mine. when i shoot these photos, i'm in trouble to tell models how to pose.

 

[YazzyM]

I really like the photos that you have put up. The colors in the first one is very appealing, and my only criticism would be the third photo... I feel like it would look better in solid colour? Nice shots though, well done.

 

[The_Traveler]

First, welcome here.
I think you may be the first visitor from Myanmar.
Really nice start, lovely colors, sharp and pretty well exposed and framed.


In regards this set.
You will get better, more complete help if you post only one or two photos.
If there are more, the comments will be scattered around and often not in depth.

I think you are not looking closely at the light and the color.
In the first shot, she is backlit and underexposed and the contrast is very flat.
If you are vignetting so much, you may as well just crop the picture.

This needs some flash to illuminate her.
The color can be fixed but her pose is stiff and her expression is very uninterested.

This other one is a much better pose; her character really shows.
However she is too dark and the background is too light.
Fix that, crop a bit to make her important in the frame and it becomes a more interesting image to me.

I hope these comments are of interest.

(I hope to be in Mandalay in January on my third trip to Myanmar. Photos from my last trip in 2010 are here.)

Lew

 

[thiha]

First, welcome here.
I think you may be the first visitor from Myanmar.
Really nice start, lovely colors, sharp and pretty well exposed and framed.


In regards this set.
You will get better, more complete help if you post only one or two photos.
If there are more, the comments will be scattered around and often not in depth.

I think you are not looking closely at the light and the color.
In the first shot, she is backlit and underexposed and the contrast is very flat.
If you are vignetting so much, you may as well just crop the picture.

This needs some flash to illuminate her.
The color can be fixed but her pose is stiff and her expression is very uninterested.

thanks alot budyy.
her pose is stiff.yep it really do. she is my friend and she got no experience in photography. i also difficult in telling model how to pose.

This other one is a much better pose; her character really shows.
However she is too dark and the background is too light.
Fix that, crop a bit to make her important in the frame and it becomes a more interesting image to me.

thanks again.

 

[chuasam]

Rule of thumb: Never desaturate a person's skin. EVER.

 

[edirik]

agree

 

[JoshuaSimPhotography]

Love how you used some vignetting.

 

[thiha]

Love how you used some vignetting.

thanks you.
thanks you very much.

 

[rokvi]

when i shoot these photos, i'm in trouble to tell models how to pose.