They all seem either out of focus or motion blur from the longer exposure times. I would recommend a tripod but in this case when people move a nice flash could come in handy. Night time stuff can be tricky especially with long exposures and moving people involved. Just go out and keep trying! gl
tj
Alright but if you are just using the flash built into the camera you probably won't like the results because the lighting will end up being harsh. GL
tj
All pretty bad, but I think the third one is my favorite.. Just holding hands.... As long as they're not planning to sneak out later when their parents are drunk and passed out.. and the the dad has to load the rock salt into the 12 guage and wait for Mr. Special to bring his daughter home....
Third is the best idea, but it's awkward looking. I'm not sure if it's because of the position of the light or the people or both. I don't like that the edge of the wall is coming out of the guy's head. It's also not centered.