Not sure what you're going for here. There are a lot of technical issues here, of course, but whatever. This is clearly a picture that means a great deal to someone. It's a mother, a baby, and a moment in time that probably mean something to people otherwise connected with the mom, the baby, the kids in the scene. Why should *I* care, though? There's nothing in this that makes me interested, and the dark graininess and the softness do not help there, they get in the way of me finding any connection to it. You have gotten a sense of motion, and a little sense of mystery, of time passing, something like that, but there's nothing in it for me, as far as I can see, for anyone outside the group this picture resonates with.