not first time with d40 but needy for advice.. C&C thanks!

[austriker]

so i think my photos are improving, hopefully those who have witnessed my material will agree. here are a few of the better shots from the last few weeks. please give me some advice so that i can get better thanks!

1. sunset in seattle, highly post processed in iPhoto =)

2. abstract art park in seattle

3. abstract V .. do ya like it?

4. Train in seattle

5. Baby!! my new 9 month old cousin

thanks

 

[KhronoS]

I love the kids eyes Big and blue

 

[DRoberts]

I like everything about #1 except for the sun...it's to much. Would look great if you cropped or cloned it out.

Really like the lines in #2, the plane trails really add to it...nice shot.

#3...nope. sorry just the composure and content strike out with me.

#4...might be my personal preference, but I wouild crop the top out at the top of the very far back tree line, and on the right side at the front tallest pole. This one might even work with a B/W conversion.

#5...Amazing eyes, excellent catchlights too...just overall to busy. Try cropping to a fullframe face.

These are much better, I can see that you have been putting some thought into your shots. That's what it takes, keep up the good work.

 

[austriker]

thanks yea im workin on it =) ... thanks for the advice, thats what im looking for inorder to improve.. i do have some other shots of hte baby full face but they are just not as clear but i will look and see if i have better one or crop it and post it

any others? 75 views and only one critique =(