Notes in His Head

[matseski]

I am taking an intro photography class and we have to do a self-portrait. Everyone always comments on my eccentric hair when listening to music so I tried to highlight that look.


C&C would be greatly appreciated.


Thanks for looking

 

[kacielynch]

Wow, that's some crazy hair. I wouldn't have cut it off at the top though. It's bothering me lol.... I feel like I need to see the rest.

 

[matseski]

I reworked some of the editing, adjusted the crop, and tried to minimize some of the distortion.

 

[D-B-J]

Nice lighting but the dark shadow on your forehead really bothers me. Lighten it in post? I distracts from all the hair. I like the "grunge" feel to the photo.

Regards,
Jake

 

[daarksun]

Nice image. I like it.