NSFW C&C please :)

MissCream · Dec 9, 2011

My room mate AGAIN.... I only used one light for this, I like the way it looks like she's in the shadow of him but (#1) do you think she could have used more light?
I feel like I'm at a plateau, I keep coming out with the same stuff over and over... I can't wait until I get portable power so I can shoot on location

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Untitled by Ms. Cream, on Flickr

2. Not sure how I feel about this one, someone think for me please!

Untitled by Ms. Cream, on Flickr

MTVision · Dec 9, 2011

Love the first one. The 2nd one looks good but it looks like someone off to side has their hand on her boob. His hand would probably look OK but it's her hand that's bothering me.

MissCream · Dec 9, 2011

MTVision said:
Love the first one. The 2nd one looks good but it looks like someone off to side has their hand on her boob. His hand would probably look OK but it's her hand that's bothering me.

Bahaha it does look like that! I'll try a different crop so you can see her arm

Thanks for pointing that out

ryan_caldero · Dec 9, 2011

I think the first one is good and maybe if you added a fill light with a reflector that would have brought some more light onto her... in anycase its slick!

MissCream · Dec 9, 2011

Yeah maybe I'll give that a try, it's an easy re-shoot

tirediron · Dec 9, 2011

I would definitely like to see more light on her; maybe not a lot, but enough to define her shape a little more clearly. As for #2, I don't know why; it may be the angle of the arm, or the apparent differnce in skin tone, but it looks to me like someone else's arm that has reached out and is covering her breast. Slightly odd. I think if neither arm were there and her breast was bare, this would be a far stronger shot.

MissCream · Dec 9, 2011

tirediron said:
I would definitely like to see more light on her; maybe not a lot, but enough to define her shape a little more clearly. As for #2, I don't know why; it may be the angle of the arm, or the apparent differnce in skin tone, but it looks to me like someone else's arm that has reached out and is covering her breast. Slightly odd. I think if neither arm were there and her breast was bare, this would be a far stronger shot.

Thanks for the critique! Yeah I'm not sure why the heck I didn't see that creeper arm lol. I'll re-shoot tomorrow with either a reflector or my other light which ever works best. I would like to do a completely topless but there is no way she would go for it

That is a tight crop, the full shot does have a hand attached to that arm so I'll try to re-crop it and see it that looks better.

Robin Usagani · Dec 10, 2011

Rebecca,

Ask her if you can experiment with this
Nude with laser light - JPG Photos

bazooka · Dec 10, 2011

Schwettylens said:
Rebecca,

Ask her if you can experiment with this
Nude with laser light - JPG Photos

Holy crap, brilliant. I don't do nudes, but imagining all the possibilities....

tirediron · Dec 10, 2011

Schwettylens said:
Rebecca,

Ask her if you can experiment with this
Nude with laser light - JPG Photos

Very cool!

MissCream · Dec 10, 2011

That is super cool, not sure how it's done though

Robin Usagani · Dec 10, 2011

tell her to be still, use bulb long shutter mode, shoot lasers at her. Probably the best way is to put the laser on the string and rotate it really fast and draw straight lines on her from head to toe.

JClishe · Dec 11, 2011

I agree with the other comments. For #1 I like the darkness between their bodies, and I think the photo would benefit from just a bit of light on her back to bring her form out from the backdrop. Same thoughts as everyone else about the creeper arm in #2. And I think he should be cupping her breast a little more; it looks almost like he's afraid to be touching it the way it currently is.