I love the concept, it's got that pin-up feel and it's certainly sexy. I just think that either her expression kills the shot (or just that it could have been so much better if she had a devilish grin). Even in the other shot I've seen with this girl (on the floor), she just doesn't look 'into it'....if you know what I mean. Maybe that's just how she looks...but like I said, I've heard it from many sources....it takes practice and experience before they are comfortable enough, doing this kind of shoot, to give you those great expressions.