Ocean shot for C&C

[c_pass]

Hey everyone,

I was going thru my collections of photos that I've taken and wanted to get some C&C on this shot here.

Here it is...

Thanks for looking

 

[gsgary]

What is the focal point ? there needs to be something to draw you in, i have one similar but with a bit extra
http://gsgary.smugmug.com/Sports/Surf-StIves-12911-afternoon/i-z7Rq9Ct/0/L/Jasaon-Robinson-1-L.jpg

 

[spacefuzz]

I agree needs to be more of a focus. The placement of the breaking wave is nice, but not enough. Also looks like a green tint.

 

[c_pass]

What is the focal point ? there needs to be something to draw you in, i have one similar but with a bit extra
http://gsgary.smugmug.com/Sports/Surf-StIves-12911-afternoon/i-z7Rq9Ct/0/L/Jasaon-Robinson-1-L.jpg

Thats an awesome shot!

I agree needs to be more of a focus. The placement of the breaking wave is nice, but not enough. Also looks like a green tint.

To answer both of you, when looking back at this, I liked the overall scene in general... but as far as focus, breaking wave is the focal point...
Maybe If I crop in from the original it can show more as the focal point?

 

[gsgary]

Here's one of my wave shots, I shot doown across the beach instaed of head on, i also got low and shoot with a long lens (600mm) and this is not a big wave getting low with a long lens give the impression of it being bigger than it is