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jemstar555

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From a recent trip to Heswall:

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I really like the first one, but the other ones I feel could use a slight color boost. The colors, as shot, seem a bit flat, but that somehow works for number 2. These are great and very artistic. Here's what I see with the third one.


Ship by longm1985, on Flickr

Rather minute differences, if you ask me, but they're a great start.
 
The first is quite nice, but would be better cropped tighter all around (except on the right). There really isn't enough interaction with the boat in the background to keep it, imo, because it is so small and it's not really clear whether it is floating in the water or grounded like the one in the foreground. The boat will seem more "trapped" if the frame edges are closer to it. Clone the spot in the sky just above the front of the boat (and the one high up in the middle if you don't crop it out).
 

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