On the fence.

[craig]

The first frame from a recent portrait shoot. Let me know what you think.

 

[danalec99]

Hi Craig, I'd have moved a bit to the left while composing this frame.
But I'm sure you may have had your preferred reasons for composing the way it is.

 

[Rolleistef]

Hi,
i would have overexposed a bit, perhaps 1/2 stop, in order not to have such a dark face.
And a bit on the right (sorry danalec) to follow the eyes direction.
Nice shot otherwise.

 

[danalec99]

And a bit on the right (sorry danalec) to follow the eyes direction.

I'd (the photographer) have moved a bit to the left, so that the fence would come from the bottom right of the frame. Don't know if that's what you meant.

 

[LittleMan]

I agree with Danalec because the fence is what makes this photo interesting...

Great shot all in all! :thumbup:

 

[craig]

Thanks gang!!! Dan is on point (as always). I think the photo would be stronger if the fence was coming from the bottom right. I have a problem with "center heavy". The other problem was that the ol' SB600 flash could not take the cold. Hence the impromptu exposure. None the less we both like this shot.