One foggy day

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  1. Kalyt

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    Hi

    It would be nice if you could comment on this picture. I need some constructive criticism and advice, how too improve my photography. In advance thanks.


     

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  2. xenskhe

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    It's hard to offer helpful ideas based on one picture only. What I like from this picture is your feelings for the atmosphere and the image quality is good. The composition is weighted to the right side with a large blank area of fog which doesn't quite balance out the whole frame. I do like images that use big areas of fog with a smaller element as a focal point. This might be better if it was a tree more isolated from the other trees, and more centered. With a longer lens or closer to the tree with the animal feeding may have given the image more impact. The color, contrast of the image is nicely done.
     
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    Positives and negatives. Positive in the way you've proceed and presented the image. In terms of colour and contrast you really have conveyed the sense of fog. Negatives in terms of composition.
    With composition, asymmetric balance. You can balance your image across the diagonals. When you create the frame that encloses your image you not only create the strong verticals and horizontals but you also create two strong diagonal lines. The problem with your image is that you've put everything of interest on one side of the diagonal. That leads the eye away from half your image and unfortunately off the edge of your image. You're asking yourself, "what's to the right?"

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    So what happens if you shift the subject so it most definitely crosses that line? Instead of your eye starting in the right and progressing to the right, your eye starts at the right and progresses left. You achieve this simply by moving the frame and hence the implied grid-work (diagonals etc) that goes with it and suddenly the interest in you shot appears in a different place in relationship to it. So your eye starts and finishes in different places simply because the centre of the image has shifted.

    You impose geometry on an image when you impose the strict rectangle that encloses it. Think of composition as relating the lines of your subject with the implied grid-work of your framing:

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    @Tim Tucker, that's a great crop and an excellent explanation.
     
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    Great explanation! :clap:
     
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    @xenskhe I agree, it could have been an interesting composition if i could have been done! But thanks a lot for the feedback.

    @Tim Tucker Thanks a lot for the feedback, it's really useful. As the other mentioned the explanation is excellent. I'll defiantly have that i mind the next time I compose a picture.
     
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    You either have a picture that needs cropped from the top to a panorama aspect, OR you need, as was suggested and shown above to crop from the left. Nice mood, and subject.
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    I actually prefer his original crop - it just needs some of the trunk/branch greys pushed closer to black to increase the tonal range
     
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    @Tim Tucker Wow that is some useful advice, I have made that mistake too quite a bunch of times :(

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    I agree with Tim, it's a great explanation
     
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    Now I have your attention I'd like to loose it again by exploring this idea a little more. ;)

    I'd like to try and show you just how strongly patterns of composition are linked to the frame in which you enclose your image, and are not really contained within the image itself. I'm hoping that this will maybe help in understanding composition.

    It may sound a little odd at first.

    It may help to understand a little about how the eye works. If I said gauge a distance of 663mm then I recon that I would have a fair amount of variation in ten estimates. But if I provided a rectangle and asked you to judge the centre then I think you could all do it with a fair amount of accuracy. This is because we judge things by comparative size. When you provide a rectangle you also provide a centre, you see this so clearly you barely think about it. With a centre you have divided the image into two equal parts on both the horizontal and vertical axis. Again you do this so instinctively you sometimes barely think about it. The point is that so far all your reference points for balance and scale are entirely about how the subject relates to the frame. No matter how hard you try not to when you impose a rectangle on nature you impose a grid structure which your eye uses to estimate size, scale and balance.

    I'd like to illustrate how strong these patterns are with some simple polka dots. It's very important to remember that the relationship between the dots in all three images does not change, all that changes is their relationship to the frame. I will go one step further, if you're willing to take a leap of the imagination, and say that the patterns are entirely a function of the frame alone. They not only become visible when you line the dots up with them, but also disappear when you don't. See how the patterns you see change simply by moving the frame.

    The first pattern is random:

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    The same dots with exactly the same spacing, relating in exactly the same way to each other as they did before. Only now the way they relate to the frame has changed:

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    Now the above is just highlighting the obvious patterns within the frame, there are an infinite amount of other, more interesting ones. Again same dots, different frame:

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    You're welcome. You can crop however, but you're too far away IMO from the cow(?), from the copse of trees. Also the tree needs separation IMO from the copse of other trees. Regards.
     

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