One of my favorite pictures ruined by bad composition! Help?

[bigtwinky]

I'm not a fan of the amount of blurry foreground. I don't mind some, but I find there is too much. As suggested, a slight crop and darkening of the area might help.

As for the deer, if you want a silhouette, then adjust it darker.

You can see varying opinions on what to do (leave it, change a leave b, change b leave a,...), but in the end, this is YOUR image so you decide what you like best and there ya go. Creating an image is not doing what others want, its doing what you like and what you see. Take their comments, learn, but dont always adjust just because someone says so.

 

[ucfjag]

Thanks for all the advice guys! I have to run to class, but I'll see if I can edit the picture some later!



-Paul

 

[Frequency]

You kept the middle ground in focus, which was the best thing to do here; and the result is fantastic; so far i could not understand what bothers you :scratch: