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[PNWSGM]

C&C Please.


Untitled by M.Larsonphotography, on Flickr

 

[Trever1t]

On my work monitor, which is just average and uncalibrated:

The composition is ok with exception to the disembodied head and background elements. A shorter DOF needed.
The wheel and tire are lost in the blackness, some light fill was needed.

 

[cgipson1]

^Trever nailed it! What he said covers it pretty well! With some additional light, you could also avoid blowing out the background....

 

[PNWSGM]

On my work monitor, which is just average and uncalibrated:

The composition is ok with exception to the disembodied head and background elements. A shorter DOF needed.
The wheel and tire are lost in the blackness, some light fill was needed.

I laughed at this for some reason. However there is a body, white t-shirt. Might just be the screen you are on. I can see it.

The tire definitely is lost in the darkness, for some reason it looks lighter in photoshop than it does on here. :/

 

[imagemaker46]

This one that could use a little post, take all the background out and I would use the smudge tool in photoshop on the front end and side to help clean it up a bit.

 

[charlie76]

I'd clone that guy out entirely, improve the shades and contrast on the wheel and the light area top right

 

[PNWSGM]

This one that could use a little post, take all the background out and I would use the smudge tool in photoshop on the front end and side to help clean it up a bit.

Would you mind showing me what you mean?