Moved to a more appropriate section (General Shop Talk is intended for discussions on business-related matters). There are rather a lot of images for which to provide detailed C&C, however in general, the shots of the child require fill light of some type (OCF, reflector) to get some light & life into the eyes, the cycling shot with the orange-helmeted rider is nice exposure-wise, but you missed focus resulting in a soft image. The other cycling shot is just a bit too "flashed". The war graves image is fine technically, but to be honest, lacks (IMO) any real point of interest.