Orane and Mango

[D-50]

My first attemp at still life, still working on the background issue. Although i kinda like the teture in the backdrop. Any comments are welcome.

 

[Remi M.]

I love the tones and colors. But I would change the composition a little bit. I would reshoot with the subject on the right. So the lit background is in the shot and the dark is cut off. Right now the lit background and the subject is pulling the eye to the extreme left so much that it makes the 2/3 of photo on the right ... for lack of a better word boring.

 

[DeepSpring]

i like it


maybe filter the lights alittle more tho so you dont get those glares on either side of the fruit

 

[D-50]

I I do have although versions with the subject in different areas and lit from different angles, Ill post them up to see what you guys think works best.