I think it needs a tiny bit more depth of field, but nice framing. And by the way, RonaldMoore appears to be a bot, probably making a minimum number of posts so it can start accessing additional features of TPF.
Thank You Devor.. I used my kit lens (18-55mm) and for whatever reason it was fighting me. Maybe I should have just taken a step back and croped it in more in photoshop to get a better DOF?