Outdoor Tub

KenC · Jan 7, 2015

Nice colors and textures and the composition is pretty good, but I'm struggling with that pole on the left and the window behind it. While the pole echoes the other, larger pole next to the tub, it and the window reflection draw me away from what I think you intend as the major elements of the scene - tub, door, pole, wall. I think I'd be inclined to try cropping just enough so that most of the green shutter remains, but I'm not sure.

Gary A. · Jan 7, 2015

I like it ... I like it a lot. KenC and I agree that the coat rack thingie is a bit distracting. I hate to see a crop and lose those window colors. If possible, I'd go back and try some different framing and angles, i.e. making the coat rack the dominant element in the image, angle the tub into the image (shoot from the right), et cetera.

Mike Lamb · Jan 10, 2015

Thanks much for your remarks.

minicoop1985 · Jan 10, 2015

Interesting scene. I like what you did here.

TCampbell · Jan 10, 2015

I like this image!

The telephone pole is unfortunate but there's probably little that can be done about that.

Part of me wants to flip the tub around... slide it a bit to the left (so the whole thing is in the image) and then put a model in it... moving the coat-rack to the right and hanging a towel on it.