Painting Paint (C&C Please)

[dvjproductions]

IMG_1396 by dvjproductions, on Flickr

Looking for some feedback on this image. I can retake it at any time, the art work is directly across the street from where I work so if I have to re-shoot it I will. I am not pleased with the vehicles, also, not sure on whether I should crop the left side some. Let me know your thoughts please.

 

[CaptainNapalm]

Neat shot but I would correct the vertical perspective.

 

[dvjproductions]

Neat shot but I would correct the vertical perspective.

I think it is straight. The building with the art on it appears to be straight (the wire gives a bit of an optical illusion). If I am wrong, please lead me to see it. Or should I straighten to the left hand side of that same building instead of the roof?

 

[dvjproductions]

IMG_1396a by dvjproductions, on Flickr

Attempt at straightening.

 

[CaptainNapalm]

It was almost straight but a touch leaning to the left. I messed around with the horizontal and vertical perspective in lightroom and did a very slight rotate. Here is the result. Similar to your retake above. To me it just looks like it's not leaning anymore but the opposing pole/wire do act as an illusion.

 

[dvjproductions]

Thanks. Yeah, I can see the straighter lines there. Its cuting off the tire of the Jeep some now though. I think I am going to re-shoot this tomorrow, hopefully no vehicles this time. And hopefully I can get it right in the camera instead of having to rotate the piss out of it.

Thanks again for your input! Very helpful

 

[CaptainNapalm]

Thanks. Yeah, I can see the straighter lines there. Its cuting off the tire of the Jeep some now though. I think I am going to re-shoot this tomorrow, hopefully no vehicles this time. And hopefully I can get it right in the camera instead of having to rotate the piss out of it.

Thanks again for your input! Very helpful

Go for it. Without the cars this shot would be better. Good luck.